• Have you used words that convey your emotion or perspective?• Are there any unnecessary details in your description?
However, later, the boy mentioned that it was not actually the saving procedure, explaining what has happened to him.
After the town experienced the religious revival, the faith in God and religion itself became very popular.
Therefore, he could not understand what his mistake was that Jesus did not want to come and bless him.
He felt miserable and desperate as he was indecent to experience that light.
• Does each paragraph of your essay focus on one aspect of your description?
• Are you paragraphs ordered in the most affective way?Finally, the boy thought about Westly who was not punished for his lie.That is why the narrator decided to pretend that he also can see the light coming to him from Jesus.Aunt Reed told the boy that when Jesus would come to save him, the boy will see the light. The young boy was so inspired by the idea of Jesus’ coming and light that he sat down on the bench and started to wait.He was so focused on the idea that could not even realize that Aunt Reed did not say it literally but metaphorically.His aunt thought that the boy was blessed by the Holy Spirit that made him feel like that.However, she would never know that the actual reason for the boy’s tears was different. He could not understand that that the God did not suppose to appear physically.UNIVERSITY OF EL SALVADOR FACULTY OF JURISPRUDENCE AND SOCIAL SCIENCES SCHOOL OF INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS ENGLISH VII “Descriptive Essay” TEACHER: Angélica María López Portillo GROUP MEMBERS: GROUP B2 CYCLE: 01/2011 University City, Tuesday, April 5th 2011. A descriptive essay is a type of essay strives to create a deeply involved and vivid experience for the reader of the item being described. The purpose of a descriptive essay is to describe a person, place, or thing in such vivid detail that the reader can easily form a precise mental picture of what is being written about.The author may accomplish this by using imaginative language, Your thesis sentence must incorporate your topic and your main impression so your readers are prepared for what's to come.Aunt Reed was one of those who attended church every week, praying and asking God to forgive his sins.Once, children were invited to come to the mess in order to experience salvation.